by SolarRay
I felt like I was there. Thank you for such a well written story!
This pleased on many levels. Enjoyed the journey of both women and the way you used the imagery of the shifting water to illustrate her internal transformation.
I so wished I was there with them. Watching them enjoying each other's bodies, mesmerized by the wonderful scenery around. Five well deserved stars.
My finger went to the wrong star, it hit one, really meant to hit 5. Very nice build up that seems realistic..
I loved how it build up to the sex scene and not have it straight away. Very good plot and character development. One of my favorites.
Thank you everyone for your supportive comments. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this story and these characters!
That was great. What an arousal! I felt like I was really there. Nice work. Thank You.
Is there any chance we get a continued story with these characters?
You have captured the essence of sexual awaking with a poetic brilliance. Keep writing for all of our sakes.
Lovely story I’d definitely continue their story because there seems to be a lot more that can be told. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed this. Especially the way you were able to make it all come alive with your descriptions of the scenes as well as the interior thoughts, fears and doubts. I could really relate to both characters and it was a lovely awakening into a new kind of love. The fear and doubt was very believable...and the eventual acceptance and capitulation beautiful to share.
An absolutely outstanding story. Well-paced and very well written.
Stunning. Spectacular. A perfect 5.0. I don't mean my score, I mean what the average of all the scores should be. Thank you. I've liked the other stories of yours I've read, all of which I gave a 5, but this is better. This is perfection. What a gift you've given your readers. So perfectly paced. So sensitively written. Thank you.
Barry
What a perfect story .. I just loved everything about it .. the only sad part for me is that I see you wrote this a few years ago and the possibility of a 2nd chapter seems unlikely. Thank you so much for this .. it made my day !
Wow, what an amazing story.
Thank you for telling it and please say thank you to your friend from us.
I have read it before and there is a reason it is in my favourite, it's because it is such a beautiful story.
Back for another read and to add it to my GOAT folder. I am so glad that I learned that I could have a lot more folders other than just favourites.
SolarRay has a poetic sense. This story has moments of sheer beauty. You Don't Know Me, But I'm Your Lover was mind-blowing, this story is also mind-blowing. In such a short writing format, to immediately take the reader to places they never knew or dreamed ... that's incredible talent.
This was my second time reading this, and it was even better, as I wasn't focused on the details and sequence of the plot which allowed me to engage more, or "feel into," the nuances of the Sapphic eroticism. Jessamyn was so innocent and pure, while Nicole was not at all innocent but she was true. The slow dance of the pure opening to the true was eloquent and richly passionate as they finally merged each into the other, finding a joy each had been seeking but had now found. Lovely, just lovely, and it definitely made me squirm, and well, other things. Thank you.