All Comments on 'Campfire Night'

This is a great way to write a story. Take it one day (night) at a timeand I love the details!!! I like details!!! All the feelings, all the kisses, all the sliding body parts. It makes a great read!!

Keep up the good work. And tell us about the rest of the ride!

Great length. I was content but still wanting more.

Thought the premise is pretty basic, still had a few twists in there.

thanks

Great!

Please do more!!