All Comments on 'Campground Games'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Getting Back To Nature

I’d like to know where you are so I can park my camper there next year. 😉

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
It was ok

But the help of an editor would be a good idea. There were a number of spelling and grammar errors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
punctuation

I read the first few paragraphs. After that I lost interest, as the sentences all ran into each other without any punctuation.

Here's an example from the last paragraph I read.

[quote] I loved how it would make me feel I would wake up with my nipples hard and erect with little goose bumps all over my skin [/quote]

What it should have read is more like;

I loved how it would make me feel, I would wake up with my nipples hard and erect, with little goose bumps all over my skin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
It makes me laugh

When a guy write a woman has 44f breasts. That's not sexy, that's fat. The numbers are the size around her body and the letters are the cup size. So, while an F cup is bigger than a D cup...a D cup on a woman only 34 inches versus an F cup on a woman 44 inches is so much better. The favpct that you thought you were making it sound like she was stacked is laughable.

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