All Comments on 'Camping in Style'

I liked the story. It holds a lot of promise. The ending felt incomplete, though. As you're planning on more chapters, I think the ending should have given us a peak as to what's coming in the next installment. Maybe "As I stood talking with Dad, I heard a moan behind me. Turning my head, I saw Mom leading David to the back bedroom by his big hardon. It was certainly going to be an interesting weekend!" or something like that. Just a suggestion.

"There may be a few errors in, I understand. Please no negative comments about it or the storyline. If you don't like it, move on. "

Then why post it if you can't deal with it?

This time the Mom and the son will be fucking too? It would be nice if they casually fuck while the rest of the family are present and watching.

Then why post without your screen name or real name. At least she allowed your comment to post, not delete it.

Merlinswand, forget about asshole remarks from "sneaky-pete" type people. Your story was great and filled with a good lead to the climatic (pun intended) point that left the reader(s) hungry for more. 4 *, but then if it was in Penthpuse Forum, it would have gotten 4 hard dick erections.

Lee2012

L.smth3@gmail.com

Please tell me you'll continue this story.

The story was okay nothing major normal stuff I would find on here. There were a few errors it didn't take away from the story too much. i felt it was weird that she thought her mom wouldn't be happy with her fucking her dad when literally moments before she had orgasmed due to her mother. Overall it was an okay story

Did her brother get his cherry broken?

It was a three day weekend. Then they were on the third day on the road. Then they stopped for the first night.

For those posting negative responses such as "I ruined a good story," or "It was supposed to be a three day.." Go reread the intro and you will see that this story is an installment for more chapters. I even asked for suggestions for future chapters. Seriously?

There are more, at least two more days, adventures coming. I'll make sure to put a cliffhanger at the end of the next one so it will be obvious. Oh, and intro also says if you don't like it, move on and no negative comments.

Reread ENTIRE story. Second day storyline in progress, hang on.

Please continue the story.

Next chapter please

Patiently waiting on the next chapter. Hope it is soon.

I really loved the openess the family had about sex and how her mother suggested she have her dad take her virginity. More please...SOON!!!

Excellent hope your next installment is as good as the first.

Loved your story cant wait to read next chapter.

Love this story, can't wait for more chapters

I'm late to reading this story but happy for the experience. I'm also lucky that I don't have to wait for part 2.

Great start and thank you for sharing.

I didnt think that the story was sexy enough and i usually love these types of things!

Looking forward to more chapters.

Hope David get to share Mom and sister

Nothing about her cherry popping on that first time or many other things that go along with a young girls first fuck. Especially with a family with this kind of values

Could have been great but instead was just a load of horse shit. Then the author comes.back in comments and tries to explain away his fucked up 3 day weekend that took about 9 days. Crazy

The fucking and sucking was delightful. Even better was the pleasant and loving tone of the story.

Keep writing more like that.

Very good story. Look forward to reading another one. Great job.

To me, a bald pussy is a major turn off. A 'landing strip?' What is going to land there? flies? mosquitoes?

There are MANY, MANY reasons for keeping a full bush, or even trimmed to the thigh-groin crease, with the point of the Vee aimed at paradise.