All Comments on 'Camping in the Rain'

I loved the story....I was just wondering if you have anymore stories published in books. I would love to read more of your writings

Story was well played out and the camping adventure offered a different and welcome scenario. Rain, thunder and lightning add to sexual tension and pleasure.

I'm a little confused here. The first part of the story was fantastic, i could really imagine being in the tent but am i missing something here?! Where did the 'dick' come into it? No pun intended! I thought this story was about two women? Was it meant to be a dildo or did she have a dick? I'm a little confused and deflated after reading the end.

i have read this story i think 7 times now and i love it! i've always wanted to do it while camping. ;-)

out of curiousity, do you have more lesbian erotica written?

This story was perfect until the part about the cock, that confused me? anyhow i still enjoyed it.. keep on writing :)