All Comments on 'Camping in The Summer of 1984'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆- (4.6/5.0 = 92/100 = A)

This story is worth 1,000 pictures!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
a brill story

just read this,it was full of passion for the older captain,if only the lad was me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice,

what can I say, youve done it again, cheers

VeryDirtyMindVeryDirtyMindover 11 years ago
NIce

Sweet way to get introduced to the art of submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Almost perfect

Only if he was wearing a uniform could have made it better. Everything else was great. A scared kid being roughly taken in the great outdoors by a dominant well-hung cop really tripped my trigger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
well done...

greart story!!!

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