All Comments on 'Camping Trip Ch. 02'

You should have a complete story ready to publish before submitting one chapter. It seems that most one chapter stories never get finished. H

there is no hint of group sex in this chapter, though I can see that you might be setting up for some in the future. It doesn't belong in this category. Also, each chapter should be longer. I could see no reason to break these up like you did. daisy

I apologize that this is under the wrong heading, I had requested that this be placed under "Erotic Couplings" and have sent a request to have this moved to the correct catagory, but at this time I have not yet recieved a response.