All Comments on 'Camping Trip Ch. 03'

Amazing story 5 stars

5* I hope Ch.04 is coming soon.

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Nice job of balancing the developing character interactions.

So...where is this campsite? And when will we gather again? :+)))

Great conclusion to the story! Obviously, the group sex in the camp showers was amazing! You tell the story with the right pace, and using Laura's perspective is very good. I hope you right about these guys again in a follow-up series, and include in it how Ashley and Laura 'made out' at school together. Great series!