All Comments on 'Camping with Daughter Ch. 01'

Cant wait for next installment. Best story I have read on here in along time!!!!

Great start - can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

damn I would have already fucked her

Every father's dream .You tell your story very well and left me with a dry mouth as I'm sure many others have. Please complete this wonderful tale and continue to keep it real ; it's what makes you different from so many others .

Easily one of the best written stories on the site. Your descriptions of the moment, the building of the tension, everything done extremely well. Can't wait to dive into the rest of your tales.

No one is that thick, daddy is an idiot if he thinks she is so naive she wants him to fuck her how many ways has she tried to tempt him I mean telling him about the guys getting themselves of and sleeping naked, come on really! She wants him so badly and he is to dumb to see it I am surprised he didn't wake up with her on top of him riding his morning glory. duh

The father certainly does seem old fashion while the girl seems to be an intentional exhibitionist to "daddy." A fairly cute story and I like how its building up the moment not diving into it.

HarryPerry the best writer for these kind of stories from my viewpoint. The way he describes it, you feel being in heaven. Good Job.. Hats off to you

Another man with the classic American obsession about fucking their kids. One has to wonder how many men in the US are pedophiles in their fantasies, and how many girls grow up loose and easy because of that family love.

the story started out good but kind of got stuck in first gear, never progressing much beyond the father looking at his daughter. it was also very absurd that she was naked and neither said anything. was expecting more.

Nice. Cant wait to read more.

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This entire story is a tease with no sex. The author had friends rate it a 5, but it's a waste of time reading ch 2 & 3

Loved the story! So fucking hot. To the anon who said it was a tease, it's called anticipation numbnuts! Five plus stars and a favorite point.

I wish i could rate your story even higher!

I eagerly anticipate more writings from you!

Fantastic erotic story.

Yes, this story is very well written and has a very interesting theme. I think his daughter is trying to get him to loosen up and be natural. I also think she loves teasing him and knows just what she is doing. I hope she mounts him and rides him as she is on the pill and wants her daddy to be her lover and friend too. Thanks.

My daughter has an awsome body also . Wonder what I would do if she was as revealing as the daughter in this story. This story sounds like pure torture for the father . I’d run into the forest and wack it furiously to bring some relief.