by Regretful
I think we all would love to tear off your fucking head and give you a load of crap straight down your throat. You're one sad MF retared fool!
...would be one wonderful trip, exactly what I've dreamed about many times.
She places my cock at her pussies entrance.....how many does she have?
The moment when he felt Emma's ass up his cock, her ass coated with his sperm & pre-cum is PRICELESS! Da stavim jedan burek sa sirom u rernu? Anthology material.
Premis is good but, it reads like it was written by a high school sophomore.
What happens in the family stays in the family!
Also a five...like Emma a lot...woman that knows what she wants
and really glad there's a Ch 2
going to see when this was posted...in any event hope there'll be more coming...
Great story except my sis in law & I both hate camping. Been trying to get into her pants for years
Good premise.
But the sex scenes lack sufficient detail/s.
For example, when she tells him to maturbate himself while she fingers herself, it sure could have used some dialog such as her asking him what he was thinking about as he rubbed his cock. And she could have told him what she was thinking about. Her doing to him. Him doing to her.
And all the concentration on her magnificent ass, no real ass action/involvement.
And there they are squeezed into the tiny tent. Her boobs were there too, weren't they? Couldn't tell from the action.
Four stars.
All the time you talk about her ass, but till the end you never fucked her ass ???
Well shit, that escalated quickly. Hot stuff. Hope they continue when they get back home and Sarah gets in on the action. Sister wives!
"We can forget this when your cum is dripping from my cunt." How this man's cock didn't just explode right there I'll never know. Props to him.
If they’re backpacking and your shoulders are hurting you need an actual backpacking backpack or adjustment. The weight is supposed to be on your hips..
Are you a moron? Fix the first fricken paragraph!!!
"The only reason I'm pushing it is because I'm going with her Irish twin sister, Emily. Emma, Sarah, and I all went to high school together."
Author's a moron.
"My sister in law, Emma, and I go camping. Her ass is amazing!"
"The only reason I'm pushing it is because I'm going with her Irish twin sister, Emily."
"Emma, Sarah, and I all went to high school together."
I guess it's difficult to keep the names straight when you copy someone else's story, isn't it?