All Comments on 'Camping With Tom Ch. 02'

yes, plz keep on writing about all the things they do- you're a worse tease than don. in regards to the fascination to tom's foreskin_ i think don should say he likes it cause it's like a bonus- he gets to see this long, meaty cock_ and then when he pulls the foreskin down, he gets the bonus of a large, juicy, mushroom capped, cock head___kinda like finding the prize in a box of cereal- that beautiful, juicy cock head is the toy surprise inside...

need to be a bit more descriptive of their muscular and well formed, adonis like, bodies. you started with looking, touching then moved to licking, sucking. now you have to move to ass munching/licking, finger-fucking, and then full on anal intercourse. and please some body worshipping of those young, hard, muscular studs.....muscle worship- yummy

bonus points for making tom a native american warrior god and don a cowboy who just so happens to worship native american warrior gods.....wouldn't that be hot??? YES

was ok

More focused, concise than chapter one. It was also very short. Don gives Tom a bj on a small beach.

Excellent. Very, very well written.

The pace of the storry kind-of mirrors what really goes on in one's inner self.

Tom was depicted superbly, vividly. He was brought to life by the author: i am already worshipping his perfect body & his beautiful dick! I would wisper on Tom's ear, "Buddy, I want YOU to pop my anal cherry. Do it for me, please."

(I've been a bi curious guy since my mid to late teens. I occasionally had homosexual impulses even before but was not yet ready to admit that to myself.)

Love ir