All Comments on 'Campus Rapist Ch. 01'

Rambling run-on sentences, forced plot and convoluted story line. Characters are written as utter idiots. If I had it to do over again, I would have backspaced out after the first 3 paragraphs.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

well would love to hear more of this...will we find out who the rapist is and will he strike again...perhaps we'll get to see what exactly happend when he took melanie from his perspective

I thought the story was a bit rushed and it did not make any sense to me why a girl that had just been raped would have sex with a guy fairly soon afterwards and have sex after almost being raped again. Perhaps if there had been more room for actual character development, this story would have turned out better.

As far as your intentions for the story, they were okay. But she suddenly falls in love for Logan? And has sex with him just after the fact that she's been raped? I don't recall rape as something that is no longer felt afterwards. As for emotionally, her coping was half-alright. Overall, with additional problems in the grammar and spelling department, the story came out okay.