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IreneGoodnightIreneGoodnight11 months ago

Great story! I started having sex when I was real young and by the time I was 20, I was an accomplished call girl. I have always had great breast, sexy ass, and hot shaved cunt. My mouth and lips are perfect for sucking cock. Got pregnant when I was 21, had a son. I kept having sex with my clients and the more my pregnancy advanced, the hornier I got and the more clients I fucked. When my son turned 18, he walked into my shower naked and began rubbing his huge hard cock up and down my slick vagina. He said he knew all about me and my occupation as a woman men loved to fuck. He took me to my bed and fucked me long and hard and orgasmically wonderful. I asked him after an hour of mind blowing sex where he learned to completely satisfy a woman. He said that he had been sexually actively since he was 13 and in middle school, fucking his classmates and some of his teachers. His cock was perfect and he always satisfied his “clients”.

We spent the next five days fucking non-stop, then had mutually satisfying sex, then…we made love to each other. I imagine the apple doesn’t fall…

CIA-JMPCIA-JMPabout 1 year ago

HeyAll, EXCELLENT, as usual!!

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 1 year ago

Each one filling a need in the others' life. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

MaryloverMaryloverabout 1 year ago

Very nice hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

memories, memories those were the days my mom was a real mom. Thanks for the memories it made me hard all over again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Such a natural engagement between them and just how I could imagine it might happen.

greasedsilvergreasedsilverover 1 year ago

A nice fun story, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like to read some more about them fucking

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Story made my cock so hard and I gave the mom my load too!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ah, you horny little mom, overstepping those boundaries. I had three sons, their rooms always had that distinct semen smell, tissues, wet socks (egg), long showers & magazines. Once they reached 15, if their door was closed I didn't enter. I never omg observed it, but hubby and I sometimes heard them, but he said it was pretty much normal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very good, loved the concept and the story, please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it. I wish my mother had watched me masturbate. I wanted to have intercorse with her my whole life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dayum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Perhaps the fantasy of many sons with their mom to enjoy any sex to be enjoyed. Smaller homes back in the fifty/sixty years when bedrooms were all on upper floor, one bathroom. The occasional meet in hallway needing to use bathroom during middle of night either naked or sheer nightgown to view.

BarmbekBi1973BarmbekBi1973almost 2 years ago

This was hot, and although a bit rushed, still shows a nice build-up between a loving mother and son who definitely both are into this.

mlektm50smlektm50salmost 2 years ago

That was so hot. I loved it.

peteh57peteh57over 2 years ago

Wow. That’s was super hot. Great sexy story told simply and well. Thanks for sharing.

Eric777XEric777Xover 2 years ago

Excellent sexy storytelling! Need it to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. I have a feeling that my wife's sister and her son have a relationship like this. As I read the story, I picture those two as the characters in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This stories keep me hooked to the very end..wat a perfect way for a single hot horny mom and her big cocked son to get together as they should be. Being pleasured by the only person that they want to be with

MatureManCAMatureManCAalmost 3 years ago

I thought it was great! Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Gave me a nice stiff prick thinking about the lady! Like to have been sonny shooting a hot load up her pussy while she creamed on his cock. MMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I liked it! So much that I inserted my favorite curved urethral sound deep into my penis and pleasured myself during the story. I would have loved it even more if you described the mom performing oral sex on her knees and experiencing her son ejaculating into her loving mouth. Great story, I think I'll masturbate to orgasm now!

paragem_oneparagem_oneover 3 years ago

Holy hellish nightmare of lust! What a wonderful, passive-aggressive, borderline personality disorder with a narcissistic sub-duagnosis mom! I think I love her. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent

Just stopped too soon. IMO great setup. Almost virginal woman, no sharing of her, even with other women. Hate stories where she's a ho.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I love a deviant mother.

I'd love to read a part two and three. I see part two where a deviant dominant mother trains her son in her ways of incestuous love in mom's bed. Then later to read of mom knowingly being bred by her talented son and to becoming an incestuous 'milk maid'. Just my thoughts.

HragsHragsover 4 years ago
Please ...more...more...more. I am additive!!!

Yes,,,,, please continue with this story. Maay be One of the best ever written. U really have something here. Good job!!!

Eaglerock30Eaglerock30over 4 years ago
Part two please

Wow another great story. Please make a part two. I can only imagine what it would be like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well done!

I love the way your characters can shed societal crap and just enjoy each other in a mutually satisfying way! So fun!

MrBill36MrBill36over 4 years ago
Oh, but for the blessing of a beautiful, sexy Mom.

”His eyes were locked onto her rear-end as her luscious ass cheeks swayed from side to side”. I can but hope there will b a second chapter to this delicious story. His tongue needs a work- out.

5*

Nutman99Nutman99almost 5 years ago

Another fucking incredible story. Please keep writing them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2 is a must!

Two thumbs :-) up!

orionm42orionm42over 5 years ago
Toooooo much whew. Can I watch.

Loved this and all your stories. Great writing and tension. I would love a part 2 with some lipstick play involved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very Hot.

This would have been so much hotter if it had been twice as long thereby slowing down the action and building up of sexual tension. 5*.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
New outlook

I usually avoid incest stories but that was fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow!

Excellent story for a beginning. Can't we let these 2 play a bit longer?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
hotttttttttttttttt

love this story!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
continue ...

it'd be great of you would continue this story, it's so hot so far and the promise of more seems to have been left hanging ...

MinetocontrolmysweetMinetocontrolmysweetabout 6 years ago
Wow....

That was a great story and as always you write with a style that is very casual yet portrays the character's thoughts and feelings extremely well.

The one thing I would say is that I wish they were longer. To have 2 or 3 chapters to some of your stories would be awesome and I hope in future that may happen. Either way I enjoy your stories and I hope you keep writing!!😊😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wish it had been my mom and I

From the time I first remember I wanted to suck and fuck my mom. She had been a chorus girl in her youth and had a great body. I regularly spied on her all summer long through a knothole in the bathhouse wall, and even got to see all the other guest ladies as well. Twice in her life she undressed to her bra and briefs, stocking and garter belt. Both times I came in my shorts watching her and then she grinned and left me alone to clean up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What about.......

This was a wonderful story I look forward to seeing more of your work!

And to Darla 7000, who wrote,

"Ohhh, my !

I don't have a son to fantasize about but now I sure wish I did !"

My mother is deceased now, perhaps you'd like a "pretend son" to role-play with?

Wouldn't that be fun, "mommy?"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

That was a great story, totally amazing & hot! Can someone let me know if we can exchange mobile number & chat abt this stuff, hope it's possible

LonesomesoulLonesomesoulalmost 7 years ago
Just great!

Great read!

Darla7000Darla7000almost 7 years ago
Ohhh, my !

I don't have a son to fantasize about but now I sure wish I did !

ME_loverME_loveralmost 7 years ago
Great

Goddamnnn great story..i am gonna jerk reading this

awankandanapawankandanapabout 7 years ago
Fantastic Story - 5⭐️

That was hot as fuck! I was hard the whole way through. Great story, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wonderful

that was how it all started with my aunt

great story again

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Read a great story

I fantasized about my mum, this story was so hot. I imagine she was my mum and I was he.

blackknight314blackknight314over 7 years ago
This story was awesome.

I really liked it. The way it worked out, except she needed to get him to do the chores before she let him have his jollies. She also needed to share their juices with him before she went up to shower.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Close to my real life experience

Brings me back to when I was a 15 year old young man. I know what having a sexy mom is like, and wanting and jumping at the chance to experience sexual contact with her. There were several happy times after the first one!

mattwilson4253@gmail.com

leespikedleespikedover 7 years ago
great story, great writing

I think you missed an opportunity with that 'bathing suit' picture. I was really hoping to see that bathing suit show up again.

I never see much point in continuing a story unless you introduce more characters, it's the first time taboo thing that gets me, after that, it's anti-climaxtic

thebug37thebug37over 7 years ago
Masturbation In A New Way

VAGINAL MASTURBATION. Damn, intercourse (make that fucking) was just down graded to masturbation? Nice way of including mother as the leader of sex with her son. Keep going with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I vote yes. great story and had me stroking and cumming. 4yourpleasureiam

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Loved your story I'm sure I came as much as the son did while I was reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
AWESOME!!

Perfecly potrayed how every mom should be like.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

Loved your story, it was well written. Look forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A natural progression

The first time I have commented on a story.

You set her fantasy very nicely and I believed every word, the speed of it all was right, this would be quick in real life. I actually think there is some truth in there somewhere, but how should i know?

There was only one bit missing, I think she would have let him have his wank with the picture and go in and watch him.

I don't agree with the others asking for more from these characters. But I am looking forward to reading more of your work of mother son relationships.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Handjob with vagina

Handjob with vagina has become my new fantasy. Thank you for writing such a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well Done

Excellent story! It got me quite hard. My gfriend will enjoy the video I made.

I wish you had drawn out the seduction so that it didn't happen quite so quickly. Otherwise, great job!fdf2

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
O-h-h-h-h-h-h my...

I thought of how wonderful it would have been to have fucked my mom. She had an

absolutely lovely puss and could take my step dads ten inches up to his balls; I used to sneak peeks when they fucked. Hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
CUM

Once again I was so hard reading this I just let my cum rush out of me without touching myself. Then I scooped it from my stomach and swallowed every bit of it .OMG I love tasting my self after I read your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
what agreat story.

Had me a hard in seconds.Hope theres more to come. talking of cum I did and it was great. Even had a second wank which lasted longer but with the same outcome. Wonderful

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Whatta Story

I really enjoyed her complete capitulation there toward the end. From a prim, proper, uptight mother, to her son's cock slut, just like that!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Brought back memories

I absolutely loved the way you captured the moments and erotic scenes...my Mom stroked me several times and to this day are considered the most incredible times of my sexual life...never mentioned after, but that all knowing smile never went away!

singaporechrissingaporechrisalmost 9 years ago
Wow!

What a great story, well paced with great descriptions. I got so hard reading it. More please perhaps with her sister?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Tits

How nice to read a good story with normal sized tits instead of ugly great melons..

bad1_bbad1_babout 9 years ago
OMG

That was so hot.

crazykindacrazykindaabout 9 years ago
More Please!

Thank you for an awesome orgasm, you are so talented, can't wait to read more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Gotta read another of your stories

Nasty - nasty - nasty! Moms don't fuck their sons - and it must be because it's so f---ing hot and horny!! I like this one a lot although the fantasy factor is so f---ing high I can't believe it!! Keep it up we need more stories like this to keep our cocks hard!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
OUTSTANDING

One of the best stories I have ever read!!!! Please write at least 2 more chapters to this great one. Adding to it would just make it even better.

mrc4nn0nmrc4nn0nabout 9 years ago
really good

loved the story, although i think you need to work on the dialogue in future, it was a bit stiff in places and felt a bit too formal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
agree w/ more, more

that is an awesome story. please add chapters. the G man

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More! More!

I agree with some of the other comments. MORE CHAPTERS! Your style of story telling needs to be enjoyed by those of us who like your wit. Thanks!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmm

Makes me hard, now I have to pull my cock out and stroke.... mmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
avid taboo fan

I remember when I was 13 I found an album of my mom wen she was younger, she was having sex in the pics(no idea who the guy was, before I was born, lol) that was the first time I really began masturbating daily! Wen my mother found out, tho, it was not a good thing, unlike this story! Loved it, I stroked the whole time reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

it was a cool story needed more looking forward to another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story...but

But you jumped to the sex a little quick. Right from a sexy handjob to the pussy in a flash. Maybe having mom masturbate with him some. Still hot tho. Rusty

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
But you never continue the story! Hey all

you could really do this story a great favor is you wrote about him staying in is mother's bedroom and sleeping with her and fucking her all night long!! Think about writing another chapter./ Bonnie

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

Loved this. Got me so wet I fingered myself to two orgasms while reading. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
spoiler alert

A very enjoyable read but I was disappointed the mom didn't dig up the old bathing suits she was wearing in the two pictures. I didn't really find the top or bottom choice added anything to the story but the fancier "handjob" angle was great.

oldergentleman69oldergentleman69almost 10 years ago
Love it!

The build up and of course the Mother being so shy and all! lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great Story

HOT LIKE HELL ! ! ! ! ! ! MORE, MORE, PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

mmmm....... aaaahhhhh i am mother of 23 years son. we have similar conditions. its very nice to have young cockall day and night...... uuummmmmm aaaahhhhh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
MOre More More

fanfucking tastic

OOAAOOAAabout 10 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mother

was divorced and we lived alone. I was 20 at the time of story. She was very good looking. When I would get home late she would be already in bed asleep. I was very active with other women but I had many times masturbated because of her. A few times I walked in her room and lifted the covers and watched her naked pussy and tits, I would caress her pussy hair lightly and sometimes kiss a brest, she never seemed to notice, I would then go to the bathroom or my room and jerk off. I know she knew what was happening but we never spoke or did anything else!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story!

Good story; pretty hot & easy mom! We need more like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
SEQUEL!

I need more! PLEASE make a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wish I was a woman

So I could feel some one cumming inside my wet pussy ane I bet men would rather get blow jobs from a woman thang a guy and I deff. like giving those

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Been there before.

A great story, well told and it could be true.

I had a similar experience as an 18 year old. I was working the night shift in a hospital and came home in the morning one day, walked in to my bathroom and found my mom using my shower. She made the excuse that she didn't want to clean her and my shower that morning.My mom was left a young widow when I was 10 years old, and I don't think she had had a man since. When she had finished showering with me watching, she asked me to have a shower and she could watch. Then she asked could she come in and wash my back and give me a massage to ease the effort of the nights work.She washed my back and massaged my shoulders and then turned me around and washed my erect cock and brought me off.

After drying each other she said that we should wait till l had slept before we talked about it.

Will write the full. true story one day. K

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot!!

Imagine the mom as jacqueline fernandes.. Its way hotter then

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
absolutely amazing

This story is super hot. Are there sequels?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
amazing story

Why can't this happen in real life! Its so perfect in every way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great story. Lost count how many times I came..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Awesome story. I have fantasized about that premise(mom finding out son masturbates to pics of her) and you did the story great justice. Am rock hardnow. Thanks,

henry42henry42almost 11 years ago
God This was so freekin HOT😛😛😛😛😛😛

😍I really enjoyed this, mmmmm had many orgasm Thank You Pleas keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great!!

A nice fantasy......I came twice....keep it up :-)

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 11 years ago
Can I Watch

This story, after some introductive character self-examination, and overview, really gets to the nub of the plot hurriedly.

Mom (Karen) thinks she has control of the necessary incestual stimulation of her sexual urges and needs; however, she lost control long ago with her son, just after she agreed to bargain with him. She never looked back after that encounter, she wanted more, and she gave more, and she got it all with nary a pause!

Of course, as with most readers, I concur and urge the writer to extend this most joyous, incestual (I DON'T CARE HOW OFTEN YOU USE THE WORD) mother and son joyfuckfest. My personal opinion is Mother Karen should be impregnated, they began dating, fulfilling their lives as any male and female lovers do, movies, camping, dinners, a cruise, hiking, cabin in the wilderness (all with Mother Karen showing a little skin, no panties, braless, even her son letting her play and arouse him in the same manner, but ALWAYS with just the two of them). The perfect incest relationship is keeping it pure with just the love-bird characters acting just as if they are any other couple in love, engaged and married.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good and bad feedback

wheres the build up? theres no way she would just go straight to the point within a day. the thought process was sloppy. you need to add some sort of suspence. now that i said all of that it was however very well gramatically correct and very precise. the eroticism of it did have a good impact

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
the one

i never comment i have read hundreds of story's on this site this is one of the best

if not the best please write more

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