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almost_wildalmost_wildabout 15 years ago
Hot. Passionate.

Definitely want more of that :D

eightballbumeightballbumabout 15 years ago
Extremely well written

"my soul on holiday" That got me me laughing. Looking forward to more. 8bb

SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 15 years ago
Appeal is right!

So much warmth between these characters! They aren't just fucking; this is intense. It has a few typos and a few little errors here and there, but I enjoy Jack and Abbey so much I just ignored them. You write with great heart. I look forward to more.

knightofheartsknightofheartsabout 15 years ago
Bravo

First of all good show, keep it up. I'm particularly impressed by how you manage to make the not-sex just as hot and sexy as the sec scenes a la "the art of sexing without sexing".

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I have been an erotic fiction author for many years - and a highly rated one at that. I have a unique ability to turn a lovely narrative into a devilishly good time. Currently in college, having finished my Associates degree in 2019 and anticipating finishing my Bachelors in...