All Comments on 'Can You Keep A Secret?'

I think he needs to do a little more checking on his wife, he may not be the only cheater in the family.

You've set this one up to go forward with many possible plot developments--and I hope you'll continue it! It's terrific so far.

Thanks, ohio

Good start to a neat story line, but this really needed to be edited before submission. Too many silly errors that just had no place being in the story, yet they distracted from the overall flow and quality.

It did get better, error-wise, as the story unfolded though.

Great story.

Maybe he should try this same approach with his wife...