All Comments on 'Candle Play'

by CheeseCake4u

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Thanks for your first story here, Cheesecake. It was not apparent that English is not your first language. The scene was nicely put together. Because I'm not personally a fan of rough stuff, my only difficulty is the description line used with the title. You did give us some content warnings but those don't directly mean rough. The description line said loving couple. Loving couples certainly can enjoy rough. 'Loving' isn't mentioned around here that often so I was expecting a more romantic bdsm based scene. Them playing rough was a disappointment for me, but I understand that is due to my interpretation and expectation. Please do post more.

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