by STEVEN VANE
I love the story line and the direction that this story seems to be going in. Love it when a man makes a woman do things that secretly turn her on! What happens at the lounge that night? Keep her going!
Great start and I definitely want to read about Bob directing Candy to do things she would never do on her own. I am also hoping that other alpha males command sweet Candy to submit to them as well. Please do throw in at least one story about an older, less endowed even portly male who senses Candy's submissiveness or blackmails her and exploits her sexually. E/Voyeur & NC/Reluctance are my favorite genres and your characters are perfect for these type of scenarios. All are safe and have fun in fictional Lit land. Thanks for sharing.
...Candy is ready for a hot erotic massage with a couple of hunks ...video it for her and write a story for us...
I would love to be the husband exposing the sexy wife. The sex afterward would be explosive.