All Comments on 'Candy and Pam Pt. 01'

Most of the stories here require the reader to suspend his (or her) disbelief in order to enter the world being described. This story stretched the believability too much and lost me in the middle of page 2. To work, this story needs a better and more believable setup. I mean, "Maestro" after 10 minutes in the office of a woman is nothing more than an acquaintance? Try again.