All Comments on 'Canvas'

love the sense of anticipation the sub feels.

love the hot and cold play.

favorite lines:

"Before I met her I thought corporal punishment and quaint costumes were all there was to find in the hinterlands beyond the borders of vanilla sex."

"she is rapt as I outline her future" (such a delightful hint of promise for her and your readers...!)

"This tumbles her into orgasm and she clamps down on my hand, yelling in time to the beating of her pulse, the beating of her clit." (orgasm does feel like a tumble, doesn't it?? and, oh! "the beating of her clit" -- beautiful!)

This story is fantastic. The description and the emotions are very intense. I loved it.