All Comments on 'Captain Blake on Slave Planet X'

This story line has tons of potential and can go in lots of directions. It was well written and lightly arousing. I like a bit more reluctance but that is a personal preference. I hope you continue, I would like to see what happens next.

There are a few typos that a good proofreader should fix easily, but the story, and the well written sex, are more than good enough to keep me reading!

Thanks

I felt left hanging just as Blake. What is the next chapter? What of the mission? What happens when a Diplomat cums?

More please.

...and the ending too, apparently