All Comments on 'Captivated Ch. 00: Prologue'

I am definitely following this story.

Chapter 1, 2, and 3 have all already been submitted and are in queue for publishing, so stay tuned! I've also submitted chapters 1 and 2 to a contemporary romance entitled, Belle of Bellville - another brand-new chapter story you might like.

Enjoyed reading once I worked out at the end that the virgin was not the girl he was chacing. Only jag in the story was that it was not clear there were two girls, because it was confusing to the reader until almost the last sentence. Ok for the egocentric narcisist to be confused, but not your readers.

Delete or change your spoiler.

It's been nearly two months since the last chapter was posted. Other chapters were posted in quick succession. Real life happens and it doesn't seem that she's written herself into a corner. Who knows? Anyway enjoy a good read and be prepared to imagine the rest of the story on your own.