All Comments on 'Captive'

I can't wait to read the rest of this. I love the way Maya didn't have a problem with the three men, but is definitely afraid of Kazuo. Can't wait to read what he does to her.

Awesome story, you must continue this one.

Story just gets better. more and nastier please.

I like the direction of this story... Suspensful.

Very good. I can see you're really into the humiliation factor. I also like that she can take comfort in the other women, and that she's able to enjoy at least some of her experiences. Can't wait to read more!

Very well written, great flow. Love the characters and development so far. Very hot!

didnt read it all boring stuff poor