by CaptiveHacker
As a young adult reading this story, I wonder why nobody liked it but the torture and extreme pain was wonderful! The way how the guy has to be put in his place over and over, trying to escape but to no avail...that was something and story line was amazing. You typed so differently from everybody else, you didn't sugarcoated the way how you typed it but you let to go to one extreme to another. That's unique and supeurb.