All Comments on 'Captive of His Passion'

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EpixrysonEpixrysonabout 12 years ago
Liked it

Liked it ! keep writing

EgyptsGoddessEgyptsGoddessabout 12 years ago
Love The Harem Theme ;)

Love the sweet, gentle side of the harem sheik. It is so true, not all of them are bastards. Great job, keep going :D Hope you will read some of my other stories.

piedeliciousnesspiedeliciousnessover 11 years ago
good, but proof read

a story is better when it reads smoothly, continue, but please proof

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