by Wifetheif
Great story! I'm liking the plot so far. I thought the length of the chapter was just fine! Hope to hear more from you:)
Superb story, but like the others, felt this chapter was a bit short. But if you leave the readers wanting more, you have written a good story- and you have done. Looking forward to reading more.
Would have liked a longer chapter but am very interested to see where up you take this. Pretty horrific start for the slaves so far!
Just a a little too short. I guess there won't be any ransom or rescue.