All Comments on 'Captive Princess'

Good start. Looking forward to next chapter.

I really dislike it when I "finish" a story only to find it is part one of who knows how many chapters. In the future please indicate either in the title or beginning of the story that it will have multiple parts.

Your story is interesting and I look forward to seeing how your characters develop. I personally prefer chapter writers as they tend to expand on their stories better. Ignore grumpy Anonymous; they are Anonymous for a reason. Write on! I look forward to future chapters.

Any time you read a story on Literotica... always assume it will have multiple chapters. You never know when a writer will be inspired by comments from the readers to expand upon a story that was originally meant to be one and done. Please have an open mind. Not all writers know they will make a story multiple chapters until they reach the end of that particular part of the story. and not all will think to adjust the title or put in some type of disclaimer at the beginning... just friendly advice.

To Wifetheif... wonderful beginning to what promises to be a very interesting series. i look forward to reading more. *smiles*

it is promising start. I'm interested to learn who will buy the princesses. Please continue its a great start

I'm a sucker for slave girl stories, so this was always going to grab my attention.

Roll on 2

I'm looking forward to chapter 2

You did a great job on this. I love slave-market type stories and this one seems highly promising. Can't wait for the next installment!

Can't wait to see what happens next, especially who will end up buying orella

You're an amazing writer! I love this story! I can't wait to read more!