by RamonaE
It always makes me happy when I see you've posted a new story.
Even as a man I have a great deal of sympathy for what these women are being subjected to. This story could just as easily be posted under horror.
I second your sentiments, verbicide. I cringe at what these ladies are going though, even though I'm a male. The G'Orann could easily be harvesting semen from men doing the same tactics though, so no one seems to be safe. This is an interesting story though. :)
The idea of rapeing a woman horrifies me. Maybe I'm wrong, but that makes me feel even more like a man. That I wouldn't do that to a woman. These men were obviously unwilling pawns also, and probably agonized just as much over it as the women. As the women were the cows, the men were used as stud. I hope this isn't the end. You don't wrap-up your stories very well and from reading comments from this and other stories, it is frustrating to your readers. I'm about ready to give up on your material.
I'm glad to see you back with part 5. looking forward to 6.
I'd like to say things took a dark turn here but really it's been a pretty messed up story altogether. In a good way! I echo the sentiments of the previous comments (as a woman?). I'm starting to feel really bad for wanting to see the fate of the poor girl unravel further. Keep it up!
So you are also good at writing about heterosexual sex. I am not sure which is more of a turn on.