All Comments on 'Captives of Alien Milkers Pt. 07'

It was a good story, but too short and certainly too fast. Would be nice if you expanded.

What happened to Major Thrace? Would love to hear that story!

You cant just end it like that. You have too much invested in the characters. Please make a part 2

A lovely, emotionally gripping story with an enjoyable conclusion. I'm guessing you intend to continue Thrace's story elsewhere? I certainly hope so. You've got us hooked now!

I think there's a possibility of a sequel love story. If it was done right. Aside from that great read from start to finish.

You have such a delicate style, never vulgar as you draw us into the most vivid nuance of the experience these characters endured. Inside each of us are places scarcely dared, much less whole-heartedly indulged. Like a child-hood friend with a mischievous twinkle in your eye, you've taken our hand and guided us down a path that changes us, ever so slightly, forever. Thank you so much for opening up our minds to a larger world...

I have to admit that there was a sensitivity here that I wouldn't have expected. When I saw the title and decided to take a chance with the first chapter, I anticipated a sci- fi erotic comedy [ perhaps like the old SyFy show, Lexx]. Boy, was I wrong! Yes, there was a hell of a lot of sex-scenes, but there was enough characterization and drama that held me to read the first six chapters in one sitting.[ If 7 had been posted, I would have read it too.] I wouldn't mind seeing these characters in a follow- up- not only to rescue Thrace [ or not- it's your story after all], but to get a wider view of the Star Trek- esque universe which they inhabit. While I liked the latter family of series, I was often urked at the dangling of sexual themes with so few pay- offs in the end. Wow. I wrote more than I intended. Good job, RamonaE Sincerely, CatmanDude