by longingforlove
Took some time off did you? Glad that you are continuing this story.
I liked the direction of this chapter. So many of these kinds of stories seem to go too far and there never seems to be repurcusions.
OMG this is an amazing story! Please continue, your a great writer and this is a brilliant and super hot story line
This story is so great you should really keep writing it. I'm always checking if you put up a new part and I can't wait to read it.
What exactly is Alex trying to get from this poor girl, anyway? He started hitting her and now I think he's at a point of no return with that. He really hurt and humiliated her, and he liked it. I hope there are consequences for his actions.
I enjoy your storyline and I hope that you continue it. Please keep us posted because we keep coming back for more!!!
I've really enjoyed reading your story. Please continue! I would like to understand Alex more and I like the way you've laid out the storyline between the two of them. The Figging was a great touch!!!!
That's where Alex is going and deservedly so. Worse than a sick, vicious animal.
Its amusing to read the Anons comments on the story about how sick Alex is. Out of curiosity what exactly did you expect from a non-consent story? I'm loving it. Please continue!
To me her orgasms are really incongruent in this context. Why on earth would she come from this treatment? It doesn't mash with the rest of the stuff.
I think he really went too far and is an immature loser. And I am disappointed in her for finally giving in and having an orgasm on top of that. It would be much more satisfying if he had to give in before she did. I really really hope that she never forgives him.