by TheZenophile
As it's just a list of abuses performed on helpless women maybe it should be in the BDSM section.
Somehow this author has managed to combine bland storytelling with a total lack of character development to produce this back alley abortion of a story. We are all dumber for having read it. I award one star and may god have mercy on us all...
yeah, I didn't see the disclaimer for female abductions by aliens either....oh the shame.But seriously, I hope this story continues.
i really liked your story. solid writing - free from glaring spelling or grammatical errors, which instantly puts you above most writers here. the story could do with more details about the character, her feelings, the environment etc but your story structure was well paced, you built up the tension well and finished the story on a promising note :)
look forward to reading more!
I quit early on in this story, I just can’t see anything erotic about torture. It’s exactly the opposite a huge turn off.
Tess