All Comments on 'Captured Ch. 05'

You are too good for us. Thank you.

Your writing is always *chefs kiss*

So it looks like we might have the full compliment of participants so let the games begin. What a mix! A good demon, a pair of bad but our good demons, the bad demons, a witch, a female elf and Sirah the nymph mix. Gads, when the lures, spells, and fighting all start it will be better than the Macy's Fourth of July fireworks. Love it, I can't wait for these mythological creatures to converge in a big donnybrook.

More please

Your best work yet! So hot!

This is a hot series, can't wait for the next chapter.

I know you said you didn't think this would be a long story since it wasn't really you're genre, but I hope you continue. The story is enchanting, the characters are wonderful and I can't wait to read what happens next. Will Sirah meet her mother? What about the War? Will we see the elves in battle? What are Sirah's powers?

So many questions! I hope you continue the journey of Sirah and Thoran.

I won't be abandoning this, or any other series. I am sorry I do drag my feet with writing and I get easily distracted by new plot lines. I am always writing new things, but holding off publishing until I get existing works done. In saying that, this particular plot is likely to be a lot longer than the others. Thanks for your support :)

Please keep going

I know some of the earlier work said you wouldn't continue this, but I truly hope you do. It is very well written and I look forward to reading the rest of your work!!

I love these stories and the characters are thought out and have depth. Amazing

I love it so much and would love to see more of it now that we all have extra time

Great story! I would love to read more about the characters

Really hope you continue this story, LOVE it so much!

Wow, this story is clever, intriguing and I hope to read many more chapters...soon.

-g

Please continue it!!!!

You are a superb story teller. My anticipation for more is almost palpable.

Really, really loathe the hundreds of times you’ve written “not hurting her, just her dignity”. Rape is violence and trauma. Have the decency to stop pretending it’s not.

I keep checking to see if an update to this story is posted, and I can’t wait to read the next chapter as soon as you post it!

Alright, so this series is easily 5 Stars for all chapters. Although you scared the shit outta me when you said, "Ch1: A random, very short palate cleanser between other offerings. FYI this does not feature sex." AND "Ch2: Additionally I don't plan to continue it, not really my genre. Hope you enjoy." Sooo thankfully you got over that. I'm not gonna pressure you to come out with the next chapter. Everything in it's due time, I say. BUT, when the muse strikes? Grab that Ho and wring everything you can out of her! IE: I'm really enjoying this series.

Ironic that your sex scenes are so captivatingly a part of this great story. Yet in the second chapter you claimed you would never write/publish one in this series. 😅

The twists are worthy of being a part of any full novel.

Suggestion though: It would be poetic if Aelena was a Princess as well. Her hair being unusual because she was a half breed too. That and she changes her mind after Tareg asks Sirah for help in 'taming' his new mate.

In addition, have the human woman bring back a sister to Aelena. Immortal or not, your description of the Demons would make their sexual appetites more than some human women could physically endure over a prolonged period of time. Like how Quarterbacks get concussion damage.

I am impressed

This is one of the best stories I've come across on Literotica. I really hope you continue it. I personally didn't have a problem with the demons saying "not hurting her, just her dignity," because these are non human *demons.* They're going to view rape differently. The elf does point out the problem to Sirah by asking her how she qualifies harm, as well. Honestly, I loved reading the conflict and angst between Aelena and the demon brothers. I want to read more!

This is one story I that I keep coming back to, hoping for another chapter. It's one of my favorites and I hope one day I get to see it finished xoxo

This series got me in a chokehold

Noooooooooooo you absolutely must come back to this!

Please? My heart is so invested now