All Comments on 'Car Pooling Pt. 04'

Great exposure tale.

Thanks.

Bob

Your stories are good, but you really should proof read them or have someone else who is literate proof read them before you post them.

Great series so far, hope to see you take this so much farther. Love the build up, so much can still be done with these characters! Hope to see you make this a 20-30 part series. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story, reminds me of my wife trying on shoes. She really gave a good show at J.C. Penny's one time and the clerk moved us to a part of the store that couldn't be seen by the cameras and actually fingered her for a few minutes. Keep going, I really enjoy this series.

Hope he loves her becoming the company slut. Wonder how long he'll want her to stay around after he finds out he's married to a whore?

but your totally inept use of language spoils what otherwise might be good stories. Please accept that you haven't the literacy skills to do this yourself and get a proof reader or an editor. Literotica offer a Volunteer Editor service. Go to their Home Page for details Best Wishes

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