All Comments on 'Car Pooling Pt. 10'

You had me up until the bar. And then all of a sudden Mark was there.

The editing has improved the presentation of the story whilst it's origin and provenance remains identified as your work. Positively better!

m222rjr

Thanks for the comment.

I'm happy that the stories are becoming easier to read and the editing is better.

I found that if I enlarge the type to 125% to 150% I can pick out the errors easier.

Also I'm checking the words I'm using to see if they are used in their proper context and meaning.

Have a great day Tony