All Comments on 'Careful What You Beg For Pt. 01'

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redlion75redlion75almost 6 years ago

Long term or wasted time?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Gold start.

Can' t wait toll read more.

Oceans9Oceans9almost 6 years ago

Can’t wait to read the next chapter! I’m hooked!

Thumper3340Thumper3340almost 6 years ago
Great start

Wow 😮 talk about leaving someone hanging...and next chapter please!!

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 6 years ago

Looking forward to this wild ride. Next chapter please.

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999almost 6 years ago
really good start

Looking forward to seeing more

APL32APL32almost 6 years ago
Whet

Impatiently waiting for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
that was W.O.W

I NEED MORE! GIMME MORE!

PebyliciousPebyliciousalmost 6 years ago
I need the rest

Fuck... I'm dripping already.. can't wait for the sequels

mustangdaisymustangdaisyalmost 6 years ago
Got my juices flowing

Very hot and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

great characterizations! keep em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the story line as two strong lovelies came together but, seems we have been left as you could have added many more lustrous chapters to your store. Anyway, very good writing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Having earned a PhD, I know the challenges of teaching while trying to write a dissertation. Any distraction puts your academic career at risk. Adding a high maintenance relationship on top of that is a huge risk with far reaching implications for your future.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

But confusing. Hard to uderstand who's doing what to whom.

Three stars.

Anonymous
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