All Comments on 'Careful What You Beg For Pt. 02'

by Sinns

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Thumper3340Thumper3340almost 6 years ago
I’ll beg for more....

I’m definitely begging for you to continue with this story. I’m so turned on right now and you left me right on the edge...waiting wanting more

Definitely 5🌟

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
more like 10 out of 5 stars!

god. i. want. more. you are definitely the best!

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 6 years ago
ok

I enjoyed the first part of this, I did not enjoyed the 2nd part and I might not enjoy part 3 either unless there is some changes in there relationship, where they are equal

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Damnn part 3 soon please

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 6 years ago

Really enjoyable. Very intense in the D/s sensuality & you write quite beautifully. A few ed iting mistakes but didn't interfere with the narrative. This is an engrossing & hot series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story

Loved reading your story, so sexual/hot so hope you spread this wonderful story out for many, many sexy chapters.with the Professor gaining more control thus making her student perform many daring sex acts. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

Probably the best I’ve read here in 15 years. Please keep this going, it’s likely to be the best ever

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Amazing!!!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sinnful

Totally sinnful - looking forward to the next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

The grace within your writing, just wow...

AAP

Halcyon_FluxHalcyon_Fluxalmost 6 years ago
Hot

My body reacted to your writing, you've got me hooked on both characters! You've handled the power play between them exquisitely. Only tip - spellcheck!

ValensGirlValensGirlalmost 6 years ago

The feelings in this are so intense and so real--I had to stop partway through to take a breath, because my own submissive girl was away and this made me miss her too much! I hope these two characters have a glorious future together.

Also wanted to say that it was a joy to read a kinky story between two black women that didn't get all weird and fetishy about them. Thank you for that!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Too short! Need more. When Ms D is whispering those naughty things in her ear, share them with your readers!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Good premise.

But sex is rushed.

Three stars.

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