All Comments on 'Careful What You Wish For Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
wonderful story

I've been wishing for this same thing for many years....wish my wife would actually fulfill my wishes as you have for your slut husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Another scorcher!

Love this series. I do wish they were a bit more detailed but short and to the point is good too. Great writing!

TwilekloverTwilekloverover 7 years ago
Utterly perfect!

Just brilliant! Really great stuff, and please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very good story

Women that have a plan and make an effort can often get guy to take the dildo. Once it happens relationship changes for the better. More women should try.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More please

Oh i wish to read soon more of this serie. Please write more and soon and maybe You can continue this feminizing this submale and serve his Goddess, Mistress as malemaid when being at home,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
more pages per chapter

The level of dominance so intense...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Awesome!

Loving this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very Hot

The story is great.

My wife has been sick for six weeks and I have been teasing myself that long with out cumming. She is well now and I'm getting ready to fill her sweet pussy with six weeks of built up cum.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Complete garbage.

Even for fiction/fantasy it's just ridiculous. She shows him by her treatment of him, that she has no love or respect for him. Why stay married? He isn't going to settle for being treated as her chew toy and bank book. He's going to divorce her. And why would any real woman want to treat her husband like this? Because she's a sadistic bitch and needs mental help? This was just awful garbage.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please more!!

Story unfinished :) very impressive nice and going fast. Love reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What

Four chapters of pure crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
ho ho ho

the old "yes please fuck me" OH surprise, she gonna fuck you with a strapon. Well who'd a guessed.

But really, she's not exactly a nice wife is she? Just selfish and abusive.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolute drivel from someone seriously confused about their true identity.

Switch90Switch90almost 3 years agoAuthor

Confused about their identity? What?? Lol

LustyScribeLustyScribealmost 3 years ago

Holy smoke! I sure wish you'd come back and continue this series! This is HOTTT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, are you going to finish this story? THere are so many options that perhaps the author could come up with several endings to the story? Readers could vote on which one they liked. It could be anything that he is released and falls more completely in love, to where he shoots her after he is released, or almost anything in between. Longer chapters would help too.

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