All Comments on 'Caretaker'

This is a different than normal story. I really enjoyed it--I found it er raised my attention completely as well as entertained me! Great job!

Christie - All of your stuff is incredible.. this one even more than the rest! You are great!! ! !

What are the possibilities of you having Marc forcing himself on someone in public. The idea of him banging someone with people watching, him not caring and her humilation might make a good story.

THERE HAS TO BE MORE CHAPTERS

Hmmmm, I liked it. I am glad the worthless trash who shot him were killed, to bad all piece's of shit like that can't die. Poor Mark did not deserve what happened to him, but I suppose it's good he does not really remember.

This story was short and boring.