All Comments on 'Carla Ch. 02'

by loverundersouthernskies

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Can't wait for next chapter.

I read this on its own, and then went back to read the first chapter. Really well written and begins to get very hot and steamy in this chapter. Looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This is a note from a participant of this encounter

I love the development of this well written story.

The details get me quite exited (again)

Looking forfard to some more practise :)

C.S

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 10 years ago
Great story Good writing

I felt like you were describing me when you were telling about how you felt in that situation.

Usually men have a hard time [pun] describing their feelings other than 'I got an erection.'

You wrote: "The heat of her sex was so overpowering, I was in complete sensory overload."

I have been in that 'nirvana land' many times over the years with my wife.

I call it: being drunk with sex !!!

Can't wait to read about Carla & her friend.

SoleBrotherJeff

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 10 years ago
What about the lunch salad ?

Was there cucumber in the lunch salad or not ??

loverundersouthernskiesloverundersouthernskiesover 10 years agoAuthor

... thanks for the great feedback SoleBrotherJeff. My memory is a little hazy about just what happened to that particular cucumber ... as it Carla who prepared the lunch, I will check with her as to just what she did with it! :)

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