All Comments on 'Carly Claims Her Destiny Ch. 01'

That was a great start and I hope you continue with this series.

a great start and exciting start to the story! can't wait to see what comes next!

awsome. you have got to continue this series.

I loved it!!!!! your work is great gets me so hot!

You said this is Chapter 1, so when will chapter 2 be available? Man, you keep me hanging there! Please!

i have a few writers that i seek out on this site, the best by far is shoguy. her stories are so erotic and down-right HOT! she uses sexy teens and matches them up with strong-older wealthy men, who are incredibly endowed. the use of sexystockings and heels and garter on an 18 year old is in the style of shoguy's stories.

awesome.write your 2nd part.i really need toread that.your story really made me so hot.

this was really a great story and i would love to read a part 2.