All Comments on 'Carmen & Alyssa: An Afternoon Snack'

Thank you for this sweet, tender story that stirs the emotions. I would love to read more of Carmen & Alyssa. Thank you very much!

great start would love to see chapter two

I am loving this story. Sometimes its a little awkward starting out as friends and then turning into lovers. A couple of times throughout the story, Alyssa was battling her conscious whether to go with the feeling of love she has for Carmen or to stay way from her. I'm curious to know why she feels that way. Is it that Carmen was a straight girl or what. Lebasi, please continue the story. I think you have something good here. I wish you all the best.

Really, really fantastic! thank you so much for sharing it!

Beautiful and hot

You should continue the lesbian erotica stories. They are so great. Whether or not it’s still Carmen and Alyssa. You have a gift!

What a terrible shame that you have not posted a story on Literotica since 2015. You have bottomless talent.