All Comments on 'Carmen and Eddie Ch. 09'

Boring!

why would she want eddie around now jason is fucking her.that just cruel and mean.eddie pack his bags and leave the wife to fend for herself.

Read it and masturbate and you will MASTURBATE!!! This is a great jerk off story guys and even the ladies will like it. I'm telling you, this is the best sex scene on Lit, The discriptions are great and the only thing boring is the ass w/o a name who we all know jerked off and then bitched about it. YOU ARE FUCKING BORING cum face.

wife he fucked it was the Oriental lover she got for him. The sex is great in this story and you know it! You are so fuckig dumb you can't even read correctly. If anyone is boring it's you! God you are such a fucking dim witted asshole. Just shut the fuck up little boy and sit in your bedroom and masturbate thinking of your mother.

wife he fucked it was the Oriental lover she got for him. The sex is great in this story and you know it! You are so fuckig dumb you can't even read correctly. If anyone is boring it's you! God you are such a fucking dim witted asshole. Just shut the fuck up little boy and sit in your bedroom and masturbate thinking of your mother.

wife he fucked it was the Oriental lover she got for him. The sex is great in this story and you know it! You are so fuckig dumb you can't even read correctly. If anyone is boring it's you! God you are such a fucking dim witted asshole. Just shut the fuck up little boy and sit in your bedroom and masturbate thinking of your mother.

really great sex and great cucking of Eddie. We love to read thes stroeis and cum all over ourselves.

really great sex and great cucking of Eddie. We love to read thes stroeis and cum all over ourselves.

i fantasize about my wife having an affair and treating me just as eddie was treated...this story is very close to what i fantasize. The writer has written a beautiful and very erotic story....i applaud her. i just didnt like the ending...we wannabe cockolds WANT to be dominated and give up control of our wife to somebody else...so the ending of the story kind of spoiled it for me a little.

I like the original premise of the story.

But the writing is beyond terrible. The sex scenes are very well written the first time but the redundancy makes it tedious. Spelling, gammar, and flow are all below par.

A good editor would have mad ethis a terrific story.

I agree that the story is a good one but waaaaaay too long and redundant. And the way too numerous typos detract from the story.

finally a cuck wins good story