All Comments on 'Carnal Convention'

Thete aint no pussy better than tight teen pussy. Stay with it, big dog! Knock her up and move her in.....after you move to another town. Daddy might have a shotgun.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well composed and it left me wanting more.

Even though it is cliche, I would like to see a continuation of this story with a happy ending. Don't go crazy. stay with the original story line and extend it out..

Thanks for the good read.

Please continue it!!!! Hot!!!

Her super tight pussy sucks the evil right out of villains.

Add me to the list of those wanting another episode!

It's areola, not aureole.

But she is a bit dim. "but I'm not sure why you already got my clothes off,"

Surely she had been given the idea since she had removed them herself.

This is what she was saying - ".... but I'm not sure why (you are trying to charm me, because) you already have my clothes off."

Derp.

Couple of little quirks and some speech between them in bed could have been better. Nevertheless a good story and now you've left it open for a sequel?