by Libertine
That was another great Chapter you wrote about Tom and his adventures on the cruise. I like how he was able to take Shirley's virginity the night before. I can hardly wait to see what you do with him in the next chapter. All three chapters have been good.
WOW MY FRIEND,, WOW
I ACTUALLY COULD FEEL EACH PLEASEURE, EACH CLIMAX AND EACH FEELING OF ALL YOUR CHARACTERS.
MY DEAR GORAN, NEVER STOP WRITING! IF YOUR READERS GET 1/2 AS MUCH PLEASURES AS DO, WOW
THANKS MY DEAR FRIEND!
MIKE
you really should finish this -- and where can i get a ticket for this cruse line!
My dear friend Goran..wow you made this one feel so real..thanks my friend.
Dragonfly