All Comments on 'Carol and Kelly Ch. 01'

Can't wait for the next installment. Please keep them coming (cumming).

I really expected the REAL Kelly to be waiting in the dark with Carol. That's how most other writers would have done it. I liked your way better. Next Daddy must take Carol/Kelly's Anal virginity in the real Kelly's bed. Maybe The real Kelly will catch this from behind an almost closed bathroom door, which Carol and Ted never thought to close, because she wasn't supposed to be there. Then Kelly could set up her webcam to watch what her Daddy and Mommy are up to in her room. A torrid masturbation scene follows, which is caught by the college room-mate. They watch together, then room-mate "becomes" Mommy for Lezzie action. She accompanies Kelly home for Thanksgiving. Daddy gets taken by room-mate, who thinks its Carol. Webcam catches all. Kelly is convinced by room-mate to follow her lead, while Carol is distracted by room-mate, but again, there is the ever-present webcam, which allows carol and room mate to fuck each other while watching the real kelly and daddy (who is still clueless thinking its carol, until he notices that kelly NOT Carol has the hickey)the three sit him down, confess all and gang bang him

cant wait for part 2 when he gets the daughter, or will it be her who gets to the daughter first??

SO HORNY AND WET!! HIS STORIES ARE JUST SO REAL. I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS IN CHAPTER 2. I CAN GUESS THE OUTCOME BUT SURE LOOK FORWARD TO THE SEXY WAY HE GETS THE REAL KELLY!!

THanks for a very hot and kinky story, looking forward to Chapter 2

Now that's what true love is all about...indulging in kinky fantasies with the one you love without fear or judgement in the end. Nicely done!

i sure hope this story continues. its a very nice story thank you

You really need to stop starting a story sequence and never finishing it. This one even had Ch 1 on it, but after several years, no chp 2. Great story line start, just way too bad you never finished it.

Arg! No ch.2 ?! Dammit!! :(. I loved the crap out of this! No daughters here, but damn, I wish I could get my wife to play along. I love the woman but she is such an imaginative stick in the mud:(. I try and get her to play along but the best I ever get out of her when Im talking is an 'uhuh' 'yah' 'yes' or other one word responses. I miss my old fwb that I had before I hooked up with my wife, now she was the epitomy of open minded! Guess I need a girlfriend, lol. Hell, it should be my wifes responsibility for finding me a good fwb! Lol :)

who writes in this genre?

RanierWriterII seems to have started and abandoned several delightful stories.

Loved the dialogue and the hint at what is to cum...

So horny and yet so apt. Great intro into what I hope is a long series of chapters

Great job, as always. Please keep this one going: it's hot a f.

So well written!

So believable!

Please, please continue...

excellent role play scene. Too ad Kelly didn't come home early

Role playing is NOT incest. Needed for dad to at least get it in with daughter Kelly . . . .