All Comments on 'Caroline's Mom Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Slow the narrative down a little. Seems like the vocalizations are slightly confusing. But superb story

AndreqAndreqover 2 years ago

Love the story premise. However, it is hard to tell who is speaking. Voices need better separation.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

***Thanks for the hot read.

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