All Comments on 'Carol's Awakening'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nicely Done

I rarely give five stars to an author's first submission, but this rates it. Well written, good story line, and you left it at just the right place. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice

I agree with UK, it was well done. Flashbacks are always a headache and the headings helped. Looking forward to the next installment.

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