All Comments on 'Carol's School Tales Ch. 02'

by SylviaG

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 16 years ago
Not bad!

As I said in about the first chapter Notbad at all carry on!

salohcinsalohcinover 15 years ago
Good premise, but amateurish writing.

Too many exclamations !!!

lenmc02091964lenmc02091964about 5 years ago
Ages don’t make sense here.

The wife is 23 The stepdaughter is 18 how old is the dad? And 23 is not old to still be in college. Ages don’t make sense here.

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