All Comments on 'Carolyn Blushes'

On your web sight. Still, when I read it I get so consumed by it. So good! Hope you write more similar to this one... or even what happens next to hen he visits Carolyn:)

Puhleaseee

a bloody awful tale of selfish self gratification with not the slightest iota of concern for the feelings and well being of the victim!!

If this is a true reflection of the attitudes of the writer then he needs an urgent mental health examination.

Why would he care about the victim, it's a non-consent story. The character clearly didn't give a damn about the girl and was only after his pleasure. If you want mutual gratification then go to another genre. I don't understand reading these types of stories and expecting to find Disney endings. Did you not see the story listed under nonconsentual/ reluctance?

next story please

This is perfect.. As a woman it's hard to find good erotic literature. I love reading from the male perspective with emphasis on what he finds attractive - as a sub nothing is hotter than hearing how a dominant man thinks about and assesses his prey. Too many authors try to write overly-explicit scenes that talk about xyz sexual acts, but often they lack build up or intention behind them. It's a lot hotter when he's been waiting, watching, and finally gets his hands on her. Non con is especially tricky and comes across as distasteful at times, but you wrote this expertly. I love all your other pieces as well.

Hello form Greece! Sensula story, well-written! However, it was "Very pathetic" the picture of the shy girl.

Oh Carleen you're so naughty

time to write part 2, one was not enough

will he visit her again or was it one time ravishment

either she is a cheater or he is an enemy in disguise for his roommate .he raped her ok maybe she deserved it for not saying no but he is isnt guilty about backstabbing and breaking the trust if his roommate

he is definately an awful choice for roommate

also tom is the worst bf a girl might get he ignored her complaints and discomfort and listened to his roommate over her and presented her as a gift to be raped

its not fantasy these kind if things do happen specially in case of child sexual abuse where parents are ignorant and wont give their child their ears and the children are too innocent to understand about consent or as a matter of fact what is happening to them at the hands of pedos like the narrator in this story

Would love to read a part 2... Does he go see her? What happens??

Next storyyyyyyyyy