All Comments on 'Carry On Dentist!! Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
who ever writes that story....

is an asshole. it's not funny, not erotic or anything somebody wants to enjoy here. just some stupid story of how to destroy some kids lives for nothing than an egoistic behaviour. if somebody has no problems then you have to make one.

academic brilliance is something else and not for falling for the first idiot that comes along.

you can stop writing there is nothing of interest when somebody academic brilliance is below the IQ of 40

ythebadgerythebadgerabout 11 years ago
A couple of things:

First - I do hope you wear gloves for your patients to prevent spreading STDS.

Second - if this took longer to write than it did to read you really need something else to fill your time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what a

fucking loser the person who wrote this is.

x_witless_xx_witless_xabout 11 years ago
What? Who?

Vivok and Amol? Where dey? 3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
roster

Non erotic non intresting

soo plz stop now

no need to carry on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
liked it

it was a good read and i liked it but it needs to be little pacier, like the 1st part..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good story

it was hot story.please post more parts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

one of the best story I ever read...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more more more more

one of the hottest story i have ever read.Please continue dantist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

Hi,

If you are the original writer of this story then I must say you have done a fabulous job. However, I happened to read this story on another forum called Exbii. I hope nobody is infringing with your proprietary material unless it is you who has posted it in Exbii too.

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Next Part Please

Please bring out the next part. This is fantastic and you are a great writer!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
hot

would love to read the next episode where they fuck. wish she wears a transparent chiffon saree and gets seduced by Amol

atul_atsatul_atsalmost 11 years ago
excellent

One of the most erotic stories I have ever read in this forum.... I wish I had even a quarter of your writing prowess... keep writing and keep entertaining us...... and by the way, where is part 3? Eagerly waiting.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Fantastic work! You are a genius at this. Please bring out the next chapter don't torture us anymore....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please write more!!!!! Don't torture us anymore......

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please continue this fantastic story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Write more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
where is part 3 & 4 ?

Please do continue ur wonderful story with the sluty dentist.Please make her wear even sluttier clothes,get her a piercing,make her go down on Amol while he is peeing...please please please DO NOT stop this fantastic story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Continue this great series please, it begs for more chapters!!

arch3rarch3rabout 10 years ago

please write more chapters!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

love it !! hope we can see more chapters soon!!

arch3rarch3rover 9 years ago

Do you have time to continue this ? Are you planning on writing any new stories?

Love your work

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Are you continuing this??

arch3rarch3rabout 9 years ago

Will you be writing any new stories soon please??

mehndi20mehndi20almost 8 years ago
PLEASE COMPLETE THIS STORY

PLEASE PLEASE COMPLETE THIS SUPERB STORY

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The story is over

just like her marriage! or are you as dense as she is... Do you need pictures? Then ask her husband , he has plenty of extras even after he gives some to the dentists wife... Make that ex-wife!!!

DelhiUser2016DelhiUser2016about 6 years ago
Great writing!

Being myself from Pune, everything seems so real...... appears to be autobiographical almost and not fiction. The adultery is erotic as well as frightening at the same time. The conflicting emotions of Sush appear to be genuine and narrated well. In all a pleasurable read. Slow pace, good build up added on to the richness of the content. Bring in more....!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please continue.

Please continue the story.. Some idea about future parts.

1. Amol again calls Sush at his home and they have sex without condom as Sush takes pills.

2. Amol suggest Sush to have sex in her clinic on doctors bed and Sush agrees after initial hesitation.

3. Amol suggest Sush to go to Goa, for few days and they have sex. Sush gives some seminar xcuse at home to go to Goa.

4. In Goa, Amol suggests Sush to have sex with him when she is talking to her husband on phone. (This would be hottest part).

End. ..

In all above parts, they have sex without condom and Sush takes pills.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Go on please

Waiting for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Superb

Please re-start this awesome story...just waiting for years for the sequel,read this earlier...but read it again now and it is such a awesome story to let stop like this bdrew...love your writing always,but this was way too good

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