by mcfbridge
Great story but, or should that be butt ..... it seemed she did not get turned on by nipple stimulation, or even breast fondling, not very sexy. The breasts, especially the nipples are supposed to be erogenous zones are they not? I know for some women they are not, which I always find a turn off. Some really sexy women can even be brought to orgasm just by nipple twisting alone. Would also have been nice if they'd left her panties on and made her wet them .... visibly - R
The chances of getting two 6s is 1/36 not 1/12
https://sciencing.com/calculate-dice-probabilities-5858157.html
The chances of double 6s are 1/36 not 1/12.
https://sciencing.com/calculate-dice-probabilities-5858157.html
Great imagination used for plot and enticingly told. Just had to finish once started. Love how the narrative mixes darkness with playfulness. Simply magic.
I couldn't stop reading the story to see what humiliations she would suffer next.
I have never been bitten by the gambling bug, but for people who have, the excitement of winning does fog their thinking. Despite its length, this was definitely a page-turner. It was heart warming to see Janice's repressed life changed. Driving home with the marbles still inside her was a nice touch to show that.
are forced to humiliate themselves for their stupid behavior.
This story is so good I cannot think of anything that would improve it. So well written as well. I cannot wait to read the two sequels and the other stories you have written. I hope you are still writing so there will be more to come. Thank you.
Normally I would cringe away from such a long story, but this one kept me hooked the whole way through! Awesome job! Although, for the life of me I cannot figure out why a woman smart enough to realize how the weight of dots on dice affects the odds isn't smart enough to leave $500 at home after she wins it and just try to get the rest of the money with anything she wins over the $500 so she doesn't have to worry about going farther with Tony. Although, the story was a lot hotter for her stupidity :P
you have a vivid imagination perfect for humilation - great read well done x
Hot story. Loved how she just kept going despite her inner dialogue. Lost my attention on the gamling details and numbers, though.
I love the way you let her handle the statistics of the dice. Especially when she just 'knows' the next roll has to be the snake-eye.
I thoroughly enjoyed the profound level of degrading and dehumanising humiliation experienced by the woman without the use of foul language. Brilliant build up combined with the thoughts of the woman as she came to terms with the utterly degrading acts she was forced to undergo.
take up gambling...j/k...i do love long stories so thank you for that and i did enjoy it...look forward to reading you more often. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
gambling problem i think the same thing will happen to her eventually. i will make a copy of your story to give to her. she needs a wake up call. thanks.
Whatr a great story, I can't wait to read the rest of the "Casino" stories. Bravo!
I didn't like the non-consent stories, but I certanlly love this one. I hope that Janice & Tony end up coupling.
Build up was very good, and the party finale was an excellent pay-off.
Very well done. The story has a well developed plot and strong characters. I enjoyed it immensely.
Keep up the good work!
That was wonderful, you had me glues to this screen reading. Couldn't stop reading and I would love to have the nerve to some how do that to my ex. Sort of turn the tables and humiliate him in such a way. Keep up the good work. You have a flair for writing and a awesome imagination to go with it. Looking forwad to reading your other submissions now.
What a great story, it was rather long, but great read.
I hope to read about the general's wife and her fun at the casino!
Not too often I vote, but great story and very exciting. Please continue this story or a new one. Great job.